Twilight Fanfic
Links:
Fanfiction.net: Restoration by Elise de Sallier
Story Rating:
M
Status:
Complete
Pairing:
Bella/Edward
Fanfiction.net Summary:
Resigned to her lonely fate, Bella risks her life to rescue a man left for dead by enemy soldiers. Edward turns out to be a little more than she bargained for, his presence awakening dangerous desires and inspiring dreams that could change her life—and the course of a Kingdom—forever. A Cinderbella tale.
Review:
I've always loved original spins on fairy tales, so this story immediately caught my eye. It was a bit predictable in terms of what angst was going to be thrown in, but there was enough originality that I enjoyed it. I'm not sure if I'll ever re-read it, but if you like fairy tales as much as I do, then you'll probably enjoy this.
Favorite Aspect:
The fact that it wasn't in modern times.
Rating:
7/10
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Coincidental Major by m7707
Twilight Fanfic
Links:
Fanfiction.net: Coincidental Major by m7707
Twilighted.net: Coincidental Major by m7707
Previous Story (BPOV of Coincidental Major):
Links:
Fanfiction.net: Coincidental Major by m7707
Twilighted.net: Coincidental Major by m7707
Previous Story (BPOV of Coincidental Major):
Fanfiction.net: Major Misconduct by m7707
Twilighted.net: Major Misconduct by m7707
My review of Major Misconduct
Story Rating:
M/NC-17
Status:
Complete
Pairing:
Bella/Edward
Fanfiction.net Summary:
A tale about a hockey-playing boy who loves his girl. This is Edward's story from Major Misconduct.
Twilighted.net Summary:
A tale about a hockey-playing boy who loves his girl. This is Edward's story from Major Misconduct.
Review:
Pretty much all I said about Major Misconduct. Even though it's all the same events, your perspective changes slightly since Edward is the one telling the story. I loved seeing how Edward viewed all of their interactions- most of the time I had assumed something different from what was actually going through his head. I don't think it matters, but I would recommend reading Major Misconduct first. I think there are one or two references made that you might not fully understand if you read Coincidental Major first.
Favorite Aspect:
The way the insight into Edward's head was different from what I had imagined while reading Major Misconduct, but better.
Story Rating:
9/10
Twilighted.net: Major Misconduct by m7707
My review of Major Misconduct
Story Rating:
M/NC-17
Status:
Complete
Pairing:
Bella/Edward
Fanfiction.net Summary:
A tale about a hockey-playing boy who loves his girl. This is Edward's story from Major Misconduct.
Twilighted.net Summary:
A tale about a hockey-playing boy who loves his girl. This is Edward's story from Major Misconduct.
Review:
Pretty much all I said about Major Misconduct. Even though it's all the same events, your perspective changes slightly since Edward is the one telling the story. I loved seeing how Edward viewed all of their interactions- most of the time I had assumed something different from what was actually going through his head. I don't think it matters, but I would recommend reading Major Misconduct first. I think there are one or two references made that you might not fully understand if you read Coincidental Major first.
Favorite Aspect:
The way the insight into Edward's head was different from what I had imagined while reading Major Misconduct, but better.
Story Rating:
9/10
Major Misconduct by m7707
Twilight Fanfic
Links:
Fanfiction.net: Major Misconduct by m7707
Twilighted.net: Major Misconduct by m7707
Companion Story (EPOV of Major Misconduct):
Fanfiction.net: Coincidental Major by m7707
Twilighted.net: Coincidental Major by m7707
My review of Coincidental Major
Story Rating:
M/NC-17
Status:
Complete
Pairing:
Bella/Edward
Fanfiction.net Summary:
Edward Cullen - hot high school hockey player. Bella Swan - shy high school student. They've admired each other from afar, so what happens when they finally meet? Will they be strong enough to handle a threat from his past? No good deed goes unpunished...
Twilighted.net Summary:
Edward - hot high school hockey player. Bella - shy high school student. They've admired each other from afar, so what happens when they finally meet? Are they strong enough to handle a threat from his past? No good deed goes unpunished...
Review:
One of the first Twilight fanfics I ever read, this definitely opened me up to the world of All-Human Twilight characters. I read this several years ago, when I was closer in age and mentality to the high school characters. Re-reading it now, I still enjoy it, but I don't think I would have developed quite the same attachment to it that I have. If you're not into high school fics, then I wouldn't recommend it, but if you're willing to give it a try, I would definitely tell you to go for it. It has a great combination of romance and angst/action.
The Bella and Edward of this story are definitely ones that I prefer over the traditional personalities. Bella is still shy and looks at Edward with awe, but she develops more of a backbone and doesn't question their relationship every other second. Edward is still sort of possessive, but in a way that I see as being more protective than controlling. And the sexual tension in this is INTENSE. This writer has a real way of making my heart pound in my chest while reading some of the make-out and sex scenes.
The rating on this story is definitely deserved. The sex scenes can get pretty explicit (typical of what you might expect from an M/NC-17 Twilight story), and there is a cringe-worthy fight scene.
If you like this story, I would highly recommend the companion piece in EPOV, Coincidental Major (links above, review found here). It's great to see how Edward perceived all of their interactions.
Favorite Aspect:
The personalities of Bella and Edward being similar enough to the originals that it's not like the author wasn't paying attention, but different enough in a very good way to make the story better.
Rating:
9/10
Links:
Fanfiction.net: Major Misconduct by m7707
Twilighted.net: Major Misconduct by m7707
Companion Story (EPOV of Major Misconduct):
Fanfiction.net: Coincidental Major by m7707
Twilighted.net: Coincidental Major by m7707
My review of Coincidental Major
Story Rating:
M/NC-17
Status:
Complete
Pairing:
Bella/Edward
Fanfiction.net Summary:
Edward Cullen - hot high school hockey player. Bella Swan - shy high school student. They've admired each other from afar, so what happens when they finally meet? Will they be strong enough to handle a threat from his past? No good deed goes unpunished...
Twilighted.net Summary:
Edward - hot high school hockey player. Bella - shy high school student. They've admired each other from afar, so what happens when they finally meet? Are they strong enough to handle a threat from his past? No good deed goes unpunished...
Review:
One of the first Twilight fanfics I ever read, this definitely opened me up to the world of All-Human Twilight characters. I read this several years ago, when I was closer in age and mentality to the high school characters. Re-reading it now, I still enjoy it, but I don't think I would have developed quite the same attachment to it that I have. If you're not into high school fics, then I wouldn't recommend it, but if you're willing to give it a try, I would definitely tell you to go for it. It has a great combination of romance and angst/action.
The Bella and Edward of this story are definitely ones that I prefer over the traditional personalities. Bella is still shy and looks at Edward with awe, but she develops more of a backbone and doesn't question their relationship every other second. Edward is still sort of possessive, but in a way that I see as being more protective than controlling. And the sexual tension in this is INTENSE. This writer has a real way of making my heart pound in my chest while reading some of the make-out and sex scenes.
The rating on this story is definitely deserved. The sex scenes can get pretty explicit (typical of what you might expect from an M/NC-17 Twilight story), and there is a cringe-worthy fight scene.
If you like this story, I would highly recommend the companion piece in EPOV, Coincidental Major (links above, review found here). It's great to see how Edward perceived all of their interactions.
Favorite Aspect:
The personalities of Bella and Edward being similar enough to the originals that it's not like the author wasn't paying attention, but different enough in a very good way to make the story better.
Rating:
9/10
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