Links:
Fanfiction.net: Coincidental Major by m7707
Twilighted.net: Coincidental Major by m7707
Previous Story (BPOV of Coincidental Major):
Fanfiction.net: Major Misconduct by m7707
Twilighted.net: Major Misconduct by m7707
My review of Major Misconduct
Story Rating:
M/NC-17
Status:
Complete
Pairing:
Bella/Edward
Fanfiction.net Summary:
A tale about a hockey-playing boy who loves his girl. This is Edward's story from Major Misconduct.
Twilighted.net Summary:
A tale about a hockey-playing boy who loves his girl. This is Edward's story from Major Misconduct.
Review:
Pretty much all I said about Major Misconduct. Even though it's all the same events, your perspective changes slightly since Edward is the one telling the story. I loved seeing how Edward viewed all of their interactions- most of the time I had assumed something different from what was actually going through his head. I don't think it matters, but I would recommend reading Major Misconduct first. I think there are one or two references made that you might not fully understand if you read Coincidental Major first.
Favorite Aspect:
The way the insight into Edward's head was different from what I had imagined while reading Major Misconduct, but better.
Story Rating:
9/10
Twilighted.net: Major Misconduct by m7707
My review of Major Misconduct
Story Rating:
M/NC-17
Status:
Complete
Pairing:
Bella/Edward
Fanfiction.net Summary:
A tale about a hockey-playing boy who loves his girl. This is Edward's story from Major Misconduct.
Twilighted.net Summary:
A tale about a hockey-playing boy who loves his girl. This is Edward's story from Major Misconduct.
Review:
Pretty much all I said about Major Misconduct. Even though it's all the same events, your perspective changes slightly since Edward is the one telling the story. I loved seeing how Edward viewed all of their interactions- most of the time I had assumed something different from what was actually going through his head. I don't think it matters, but I would recommend reading Major Misconduct first. I think there are one or two references made that you might not fully understand if you read Coincidental Major first.
Favorite Aspect:
The way the insight into Edward's head was different from what I had imagined while reading Major Misconduct, but better.
Story Rating:
9/10
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